Read all about a “Cloud Maker” from Mandale Mill Primary!
A fantastic piece of descriptive writing from Year 6 Chelsea, inspired by a short film from the brilliant Literacy Shed. Chelsea came to Y6 as a Level 2 (more…) +4
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Descriptive opener from Year 5 Phoebe at Heather Garth Primary.
Brilliant writing from Rotherham! Enjoy this exciting, descriptive opening to a story. Phoebe demonstrates an impressive grasp of language and includes her senses to create a vivid picture for the reader. A (more…...
Year 2 Amba and Scarlett’s descriptions of Shrek!
Amba and Scarlett have created these delightful descriptions of Shrek, filled with terrific adjectives, connectives and adverbs. Great work girls!
A Year 4 Nature explosion: A Dream Holiday!
Ellie, a talented Year 4 writer from Leeds, has created this beautiful descriptive piece as her homework task. Mrs Osborn, her proud teacher is extremely impressed with Ellie’s (more…) +1
Emotional Year 5 Easter writing: Mary’s Pain.
Having learned about the events surrounding Easter, Junior has written – creatively and with impressive empathy – Mary’s account of Jesus’s suffering. Brilliantly written, but not for the faint-h...
Dragon descriptions – creative writing with a fantasy twist!
These talented young authors from North Yorkshire have been busy creating descriptions based upon a photo from the Literacy shed. As part of their VCOP sessions, the children have really (more…) +1
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